zombie-odyssey page2-redone

redid the second page. the perspective is a lot different and the pacing is better. before it was arriving at the gates. then getting out of the car, then walking, walking, walking, seeing mausoleum, then the third page they're in the mausoleum. So i changed it to, arriving at gates, getting out of the car, then walking, seeing the mausoleum, then going in, which changes it a bit making it flow more me thinks.

what you thinks?

the fourth page is going to be inked for those who care. ^__^